Presentations Feedback

• Showed initial thoughts well.
• Nice presentation of final outcomes 
• Lots of initial ideas. 
• Easy to Narrow down.
• Good use of primary research. 
• Very nice final designs.
• Good way of displaying research. 
• Good primary research.
• Delivered presentation with confidence.
• Clear drawings. 
• Planning was excellent.
• Good planning
• Well designed presentation 
• Well designed info-graphics 
• Really well designed final publication. 

Overall I am really happy with the feedback I have been given from the first crit back at the college. The group I was in all delivered good presentation with nice ideas and good final designs. It was nice to see that everyone was committed and dedicated to their work over the summer break. 

A History Of...// Finished Booklet

Open publication - Free publishing - More leeds

A History Of...// A Few Finished Pages

A History Of...// Info Graphics

A History Of...// Survey Results

Despite not getting even half as many people responding to this survey I had to carry on with my work and collected my results. The next problem I had was putting the survey into a graph as I had planed to to pie charts. So I spent a long time re adding my results by adding the last three percentages up for TRUE and the first two percentages up for FALSE.

From these results I was able to create my charts.

FINISHED CALCULATIONS! now to get them into piecharts and into my book

The History Of...// Pictogram// The British Man & Irish Man

Book so far..

British Man

Irish Man 

A History Of...// Pictogram// The Spanish Man

A History Of...// Introduction & Contents

The font and colour as you can see is going to carry on like the front cover. I still want to run the colour over with people but its very hard to do crits when on my summer holidays. I like the colour but at the moment I am thinking the blue represents male and the pinky/red female? I'm not sure. At the moment I believe I am more focused on making the publication look nice against thinking about whether it makes sense or not. I still need to think of something to say in the introduction but at the moment I am happy with how its going. To me it come across and fun and playful so I need to carry on with that sort of mood throughout the book.

Final